Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Hamlet revised

My new Hamlet paper is going good. I got lots of new great ideas. I also got 1.06 parographs!

Monday, March 30, 2009

Ive learned one thing today and that is that my paper idea was wrong and Im writing about lose.

Sunday, March 29, 2009

my new paper

This paper is proving itself to be challenging because I am tiring to relate it to the here and now to hamlets day. I'm tiring to not be very general about it I need more focused points.

Tuesday, March 24, 2009

my hamlet paper

The paper is going good. Ive got the introduction, all I need to do is comb out the wrinkles

Monday, March 23, 2009

Hamlet

The way that I would like to write my hamlet paper would be to compare and contrast now in this day in time, to what it was like in hamlet's day in age. because I believe that it will prove that we are more alike even though the times are different

Monday, March 16, 2009

Hamlet is a great story about lots of drama, I believe that the drama that happened back then still happens today.

Tuesday, March 10, 2009

my paper

Last night I revised my paper again i still didn't like it I believe that it was to short,and i did not quote right so i fix all that. i fixed the quote thing but i just couldnt fix how long it is

Monday, March 9, 2009

my paper

One of the thing that I though that this paper was weak on was the thesis statement because of the fact that the thing was short. But I hope that Ms. frailly think that it is also sweet.

poem paper

The thing that I liked about this paper was that the quotes and that work cited paper were easy. Because there was only one citation, and that after the quote was put in the paper the first time you just had to put what line it was on in the poem.

the end for my poem paper

The poem paper was a fairly easy paper, but the only problem that I encountered was that I had a length problem. I couldn't break 3.5 pages, but over all it went well I though.

Tuesday, March 3, 2009

I believe that I am getting somewhere on my paper all I need to do now is get passed my introduction and put those final touches on it like the last 4-5 more pages left. But I still got some questions on my main topics in the paper.

Sunday, March 1, 2009

the paper

I have just recently completely understood my poem that I'm writing about. The reason that it took so long to figured out was because it was vary vague to me. What I have come to conclusions about is that the man that is in it, is questioning his Faith with the lord and feels like everything that he knows is wrong but the only thing that gives him hope is his girlfriend.